These are great. I especially liked the first. Really spoke to me and my inner rain.
glad you liked them :)
Yes, I liked the first. Well done to your sister. I think haiku is a really good poetic form, it is just so concise.
*sigh* :( This is lovely though, albeit a bit depressing lolAdiyaMuse Origins FB
Love the idea of Haiku and this is really good.Here in South West Scotland near the small town of Creetown, a set of standing granite stones known as The Whinnie Face has become an attraction for visitors.Local schoolchildren along with poet Lucy Burnett came up with Haiku for inscription on the stones. Here's two verses from the stones.animals come out from hibernationuntil grass swayswith the slow windlight between larch treesthe overlapping echoesof children's voices
awesome! thanks for sharing that. much appreciated.
Aguilar, that's a beautiful poem written by your sister. Everyone can relate to it in one way or another.